New Character Mee-Yon

~Basic~

Name:Mee-Yon Park
Alias/Nickname:None
Actual Age:250
Physical Age:15
Gender:Female
division:Seventh Division
Rank:5th seat

~Appearance~

Height:164cm (About 5'4)
Weight:45kg(About 94.6)
Eye Color: Pale Pink
Hair Color/Style:Dark purple,short bob in the back ,and long front and side bangs.
Complexion:Fair Pale Pink.
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~Personality~
Outgoing,happy to be around unless she hears someone in trouble or a hollow appears in front of her she is dead serious.She doesn't go gaga over every hot guy that walks on the seen like most girls do she is usually cold to them..When is battle she plans her moves out carefully trying to figure out her opponents next move before they even know it.Everyday she tries to make herself strong in hopes of becoming a captain one day.
Sexuality:Straight
Relationship Status:Single
Quirks:Terribly afraid of spiders and other small insects.

History

Rukongai Arc
Mee-Yon grew up in the 1st district of the Rukongai.The district was very peaceful she did not have any cares there most works were done by her mother and father. One day her mother and her went out to get some water from the river and were assassinated by rogue hollows.Once towns people figure this out the hollows were quickly killed.When parents were killed she lived her grandparents before she was shipped to the Soul Reaper Academy.


~Soul Reaper Academy Arc~
She went to the Soul Reaper Academy at a fairly older age.Not very skilled on battle with in swordsmanship but what very skilled a Hado.People in her class would laugh on how she held her sword and preformed her attacks.But when it came to hado she dominated her class and even some of the teachers bringing immense energy in to the power blows.She is very good at concentrating her Hado and making it very powerful.Even inventing her own Hados she has combined Hado 33 soukatsui and Hado 31 shakkaho to make Hado 64 Shakida which combine the two into a straight powerful beam that can cut through stone buildings.


~Zanpakuto Information~
Blade Name: Foringusuta(Falling Star)
Sealed Blade Appearance:Sliver on the on the blade,having a gold star shaped guard.and on the hold a black tied cloth that flows off the sword.
Zanpaktou Spirit: A muscular man who appears to be 30 very tall,has a deep voice,black hair,and wears a traditional male kimono. When Mee-Yon isn't at her best he pushes her to her limits.
Inner World:Her inner looks like a downtown with shops and cafes.People who seem to be real walk at talk as the go through the streets of the world.

~Shikai Information~
Release Phrase: Come Fallen Star...Foringusuta
Released blade appearance:A black and white Katana split into five blades due to the five points on stars.

~Shikai Techniques/Abilities~
Name of abilty/technique: Foringu(Falling)
Description:The tips of the blades on the sword shine with a bright beam that takes 60 seconds to charge completely if released earlier it will only servilely hurt them. Once fully charged shoots a powerful beam of concentrated star lights that can either cut through the opponent,if not completely charged on servilely hurt them.
Duration: 1 post
Cool Down:3 post
Preparation:Mee-Yon stops and exhales loudly puts her right hand on her sword and concentrates to bring up the light.Once she gets the lgiht she has to slowly move her hand to the left so the release is more powerful.

~Other Techniques~
Swordsmanship: Is very fast and quick since her sword his sliver it is hard to see when she moves it.
Shunpo: average
Hand to hand:Very skilled she knows Tae-Kwon-Do.
Kido:Very strong

Pressure absorb:Can take in her body stabilize it but can't hold it for long she to release it 20 second after she has taken it in.

Rp Sample.

Mee-Yon heard a rustle in the bush she quickly turned her eye to the left to see waht it was "Who are you ?" She asked as she turned to her left. "you don't need to know who I am I'm just going to kill you."the mysterious voice said from the bush as it jumped out.Mee-Yon gasped at the sight of the monster as it jumped out."Heh."she smirked as she ran over to attack. "Oh a brave one ?"The monster preparing it self for the attack. Mee-Yon and jumped above the monster to stab it in the head. "Haha."The monster said as it hit her aside "You think a weak approach like that would succeed?". Mee-Yon said nothing as she fell to the ground and back up quickly "No,I just want to see how strong you were."Mee-Yon said bluffing. "Is that so?"The hollow said Give me your best shot."he added. "Haha Hado number 64 Shakida." Mee-Yon said putting her hands in a X formation. A beam of purple light struck the hollow in the head cosing it to fall back and disappear "No~"The hollows last words. "Haha not that tough."Mee-Yon said going on her way.

Im not a admin or mad but a suggestion on the ability

Name of abilty/technique: Foringu(Falling)
Description:The tips of the blades on the sword shine with a bright beam that takes 60 seconds to charge.Once fully charged shoots a powerful beam of concentrated star lights that can either cut through the opponent or servilely hurt them.
Duration: 1 post
Cool Down:3 post
Preparation:Mee-Yon stops and exhales loudly puts her right hand on her sword and concentrates to bring up the light.Once she gets the lgiht she has to slowly move her hand to the left so the release is more powerful.

you say it can cut though a opponent
or really hurt then would it be a difference in power and if so that means anyone weaker would be a instant hit wouldn't? if not explain i would like to hear your thoughts

I'll fix that I was just about to read it over.

Ok i just want everyone happy you know

Edit it. Wait aren't you the person from Meez ?

looks ok with me but lightning or one of the admins or mods will approve it

I hope its okay that was a lot of writing.

Yeah but i think its worth it you know

i gather you are friends ? O.O anyway...

* i know it is a pain in the butt but we need a little more in the personality.
* also some more in history, just add some more details ^^
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Name of abilty/technique: Foringu(Falling)
Description:The tips of the blades on the sword shine with a bright beam that takes 60 seconds to charge completely if released earlier it will only servilely hurt them. Once fully charged shoots a powerful beam of concentrated star lights that can either cut through the opponent,if not completely charged on servilely hurt them.
Duration: 1 post
Cool Down:3 post
Preparation:Mee-Yon stops and exhales loudly puts her right hand on her sword and concentrates to bring up the light.Once she gets the lgiht she has to slowly move her hand to the left so the release is more powerful.

We don't generally deal in seconds we normally deal in posts, so would you say it would take 1 post to charge? Also i think that the power level should be something along the lines of a high level hado. If not charged fully then it would be the level of a mid level hado. Otherwise saying that it can necessarily cut through any opponent when charged is a bit op'd.

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Pressure absorb:Can take in her body stabilize it but can't hold it for long she to release it 20 second after she has taken it in.

What do you mean?

Otherwise i dont see anything else wrong with it.

With History what should I add more of, and for there specific you want me to add ?

Well you dont have to add anything specific, you can just flesh out the years you have written about. Add some detail etc ^^

Your Zanpaktou name needs changing. 'Falling Star' is Hidama or Hinotama (Both words also mean 'fireball'. What you've got at the moment is just how 'falling star' is pronounced by Japanese peeps