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Rammus Triggon
Posts : 58
Join date : 2010-10-16
| Subject: Excaliburs light/Haru  Mon Nov 29, 2010 6:29 pm | |
| Custom Kido Application Name: Excalibur's Light Category: Bakudo Incantation: " I pray to thee, Guardian of the tree, protect me from the harm of brutish men " Effect: A barrier or light green spiritual energy is tightly formed around the user. For the duration of the barrier the barrier will stop all forms of physical attack. Though will only block weak energy based attacks. It adds great weight to ther user, around 200 pounds. Meaning that it becomes very hard to move with this active. Preparation time: 2 posts + (for every post you continue to prepare adds another two posts to the duration and cooldown) Duration: 4 posts + Cooldown: 4 posts + Name: Haru Category: Bakudo Incantation: " Those who doubt. Shall never hit me. Those who believe, shall try to. " Effect: The user creates a basketball sized orb of purple spirit energy. This energy is mentally controlled by the user in movement. The user can also stretch and alter the shape of this orb to create shields and block attacks. It can block blunt attacks without issue but stabs and slashes form sharpened weapons will punture the shield. The shield will reform, and it can effectivly block most weak and average power kido. When attacks are blocked the sheild will ripple. Can almost instantly form and reform. Preperation Time:N/A Duration: 5 posts Cooldown: 5 posts
Last edited by Rammus Triggon on Wed Dec 01, 2010 7:27 pm; edited 2 times in total | |
| | | | Lightning
Admin
Posts : 872
Join date : 2010-09-28
Location : Australia
| | Subject: Re: Excaliburs light/Haru Wed Dec 01, 2010 5:29 pm | |
| Hi,
* For the first kido, all is well except the fact that the cooldown needs to increase along with the duration. So as the duration increases so too does the cooldown need to.
* The second kido needs a longer cooldown on it. Also please state the time it takes for the shield to reform itself.
This is the opinions of several staff members ^^ we discussed it.
Sincerely,
Lightning
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| | | | James White
Primera Espada
Posts : 142
Join date : 2010-10-06
| | Subject: Re: Excaliburs light/Haru Wed Dec 01, 2010 11:56 pm | |
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| | | | Lightning
Admin
Posts : 872
Join date : 2010-09-28
Location : Australia
| | Subject: Re: Excaliburs light/Haru Thu Dec 02, 2010 9:24 am | |
| o.k just before i approve it how is the cooldown on the first kido being increased with the duration? just so we know.
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| | | | James White
Primera Espada
Posts : 142
Join date : 2010-10-06
| | Subject: Re: Excaliburs light/Haru Thu Dec 02, 2010 3:57 pm | |
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| | | | Lightning
Admin
Posts : 872
Join date : 2010-09-28
Location : Australia
| | Subject: Re: Excaliburs light/Haru Fri Dec 03, 2010 6:28 pm | |
| well then approved, will move these kido to your finished character application an this topic will become locked an moved to archieves.
sincerely,
Lightning | |
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