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| A Guardian's Gift | |
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| Subject: A Guardian's Gift Sun Jan 16, 2011 6:07 am | |
| New Technique Application Name: A Guardian's Gift Appearance: When the ability is first released, it takes the form of an androgenous angel. The angel is cerulean blue in color with golden yellow hair. The angel is blindfolded by a silk scarf and is dressed in a flowing white gown. Six fiery wings protrude from it's back. When the technique envelops its target it takes the form of a bright blue phoenix that crashes into the chest of the target. Upon impact, the target is enveloped in a sphere of blue light. The healing begins within the sphere. When you learned this tech: I'll Post a training topic for this when it's approved. Duration: It lasts only a short moment. Using Rights: This ability can only be used after Moka has sustained a large amount of damage, or if her reiatsu level reaches a critical low. Requirements/Preparations: The requirements vary. Here are the main requirements for the technique: - Moka sustains severe injuries to vital areas of her body. Injuries like deep lacerations, impalements, evisceration, and in some cases, amputations of minor limbs like fingers, toes, arms and hands.
- If someone who is either spiritually, or emotionally close to Moka suffers the same conditions as above.
Description: When any of the above conditions come into play, Moka can trigger this technique. This ability is a special healing technique that, when triggered, will envelop either Moka or the target in a brilliant white light. Depending on the nature of the injuries, they'll heal either instantly, or in a span of no more than ten minutes. Weakness: This technique takes a large amount of reiatsu to perform, so Moka must avoid using it when her reiatsu level reaches below one fifth her normal level. This technique can only be used once per battle due to the amount of reiryoku that she has to absorb to perform it, and the extreme drain of spiritual pressure it has as an after effect. After Moka uses the ability, she is unable to absorb reiryoku or summon her bow for a total of three posts, leaving her limited to Hand to Hand combat. Preparation time: This ability takes only one post to prepare. Duration: The duration varies on the nature of the injuries: - Minor lacerations ranging from one centimeter to one inch deep - instant healing.
- Major lacerations over an inch deep, major puncture wounds, and minor eviscerations - Two posts
- Broken bones - Three posts
- Minor amputations (I.e. Fingers, toes, and hands) - Four Posts
- Major amputations (I.e. Arms and legs) - Five posts
Cooldown: Remainder of fight (though Moka cannot use her bow or absorb reiryoku for three posts.)
Last edited by Akashiya Hime on Mon Jan 17, 2011 7:42 am; edited 2 times in total |
| | | Lightning Admin
Posts : 872 Join date : 2010-09-28 Location : Australia
| Subject: Re: A Guardian's Gift Sun Jan 16, 2011 2:18 pm | |
| HI,
Alright a couple of things i want to get cleared up ^^
1. You say it can only be used once per battle but then in the duration you say 8 posts? 2. Could you detail what would happen to Moka should she use the ability? Is she unable to fight anymore? etc
sincerely, Lightning/Orihime | |
| | | Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: A Guardian's Gift Sun Jan 16, 2011 3:53 pm | |
| There we go ^^ If more detail is needed, I'll be happy to oblige. I'm juts lazy when I first wake up x.x |
| | | Lightning Admin
Posts : 872 Join date : 2010-09-28 Location : Australia
| Subject: Re: A Guardian's Gift Mon Jan 17, 2011 7:34 am | |
| Alright i understand, but you have once again got different numbers stated xD but this time for the time she is unable to summon her bow etc. In the main description you have 3 posts and in the cooldown you state 5 posts?
sincerely, Lightning/Orihime | |
| | | Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: A Guardian's Gift Mon Jan 17, 2011 7:42 am | |
| XD my apologies. That's a typo x.x It's fixed now ^^; |
| | | Lightning Admin
Posts : 872 Join date : 2010-09-28 Location : Australia
| Subject: Re: A Guardian's Gift Mon Jan 17, 2011 10:56 am | |
| No problems, since this ability is so powerful a good training topic will be needed and it would need to be at least 3 pages in length. but first you need 2 more approvals ^^ Also keep i mind that this ability is powerful so abilities of this level might not be allowed for quite some time so as to keep her from gaining far too much power too quickly ^^
1/3
Sincerely, Lightning/Orihime | |
| | | Tia Harribel Admin
Posts : 335 Join date : 2010-10-05 Location : In the Sea of Blood covered in ashes.
| Subject: Re: A Guardian's Gift Mon Jan 17, 2011 1:01 pm | |
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| | | Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: A Guardian's Gift Tue Jan 18, 2011 3:23 pm | |
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| | | Lightning Admin
Posts : 872 Join date : 2010-09-28 Location : Australia
| Subject: Re: A Guardian's Gift Sat Jan 22, 2011 12:29 pm | |
| Alright so you have 3 approvals now (ignore the guest thing it was kenji before his account was deleted x,x) So you may begin training for the technique. First of all are you going to train solo or with someone else? | |
| | | Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: A Guardian's Gift Sun Jan 23, 2011 7:50 pm | |
| I prefer solo. It's quicker. |
| | | Lightning Admin
Posts : 872 Join date : 2010-09-28 Location : Australia
| Subject: Re: A Guardian's Gift Mon Jan 24, 2011 2:16 pm | |
| Alright well then since this ability is pretty much equal to a shinigami's bankai ability in power (it heals an awful lot xD) the amount of words will be similar.
Amount needed: 3500 words.
sincerely, Lightning/Orihime | |
| | | Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: A Guardian's Gift Tue Feb 01, 2011 4:43 am | |
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| | | Lightning Admin
Posts : 872 Join date : 2010-09-28 Location : Australia
| Subject: Re: A Guardian's Gift Tue Feb 01, 2011 7:08 am | |
| Well done ^^ the ability will be added to your profile now. Also since this is a very powerful ability and it raised her power considerably (application wise) im going to have to say that you cannot apply for nother technique for at least 2 months (1-4-011) Sounds like a long time but i think it's fair since i compare this to a shikai/bankai level healing ability and all.
sincerely, Lightning/orihime
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