Syuora Sattoutaki's Bankai

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~Bankai Abilities~ (Only captain level vizards may have bankai, even then only 2 moderate power abilites or 1 powerful ability. These abilites should be attacks with minimal duration if not no duration)

Overall Ability :Syuora can not only reach up to 35 meters, but he can now merge with his zanpakuto as well, being able to use the properties stated above with his own body. But if he does this, he can only reach up to 20 meters. . Syuora can also drain an opponents reiatsu much faster now, as now from draining 1/20 of an opponents reiatsu for every post of contact, it can now drain 1/15 for every post of contact.(This is also depended on how strong the opponent is)

Name of abilty/technique:Chiminori (Blood Harvest)
Description: Syuora throws his scythe up into the air, as it explodes into a red mist. the mist will then summon 4 large crimson tornadoes, about 20 feet wide, around the opponent in a ring about 20 meters wide that circle them at a fast rate. While the opponent is in between the tornadoes, their reiatsu will be drained depending on how close to the middle of the ring they are from 1/15 of their overal reiatsu when near the edge, to 1/13 when directly in the middle, and it also depends on how close Syuora is to the technique. This technique can be escaped if one of the tornadoes are 'overloaded' with reiatsu (by a strong reiatsu attack) or if enough speed is used, one can escape the ring. It is also to be noted that this attack is a lot strong near an area with lots of debris than an empty field, where things like trees and rocks can potentially harm the opponent. This technique is less useful the stronger the opponent, as the denser reiatsu is harder to absorb.
Duration:3 posts, or until the opponent escapes
Cool Down: once per battle
Preparation: 1 post



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Kido: Cannot use Hado or Bakudo over the level of 40.

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Syuora can also now make his blood into a vapor, albeit it is hard to control

This would be a seperate ability in its own right.

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Syuora can also drain an opponents reiatsu much faster now

How much faster than normal? Please state the normal rate as well so i can make a comparison between the two levels and ensure the jump is not too large.

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Name of abilty/technique:Chiminori (Blood Harvest)
Description: Syuora throws his scythe up into the air, as it explodes into a red mist. the mist will then summon 4 large crimson tornadoes around the opponent that circle them at a fast rate. While the opponent is in between the tornadoes, their reiatsu will be drained depending on how close to the middle of the ring they are, and how close Syuora is to the technique. This technique can be escaped if one of the tornadoes are 'overloaded' with reiatsu (by a strong reiatsu attack) or if enough speed is used, one can escape the ring. It is also to be noted that this attack is a lot strong near an area with lots of debris than an empty field, where things like trees and rocks can potentially harm the opponent.
Duration:3 posts, or until the opponent escapes
Cool Down: once per battle
Preparation: 1 post

How large are these tornadoes? (diameter etc)
Please explain how fast it would drain the reiatsu if near the middle etc and how close he is to it.
I also believe that the damage it would cause and amount/speed of the reiatsu draining would depend on the level of the opponent, a higher level would be hurt less than alower level etc.

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I say good sir, it seems this is quite adequate

2/3

very good, very good!!

3/3

This ability has been added to your character profile, it wil be locked and moved to the archieves to avoid clutter.