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PostSubject: The Fearful Prophet Espada, Incognita   The Fearful Prophet Espada, Incognita Icon_minitimeSat Oct 09, 2010 1:48 am

~Basic~

Name: Incognita Periculum.
Alias/Nickname: Prophet.
Actual Age: 841 years.
Physical Age: 19 years.
Gender: Female.
Rank: Segunda.

~Appearance~

Height: 7'5".
Weight: "Fate guided to keep this a prevarication to myself."
Eye Color: Lifeless grey.
Hair Color/Style: Grey.
Complexion: Close to Corpse.
Remains of Mask: Butterfly-like ribbon on the side of her head.
Hollow Hole: On her manburium-bone.
Espada Tattoo: On her left tight.
Picture: Please look at the avatar (the clothing is exclusive for her resurrecion). Incognita wears a white, wide blouse with something that may seem like an award ribbon on the side of her neck. Her blouse is also a opened, exposing her cleavage. She wears a white hakama with a black sash. In her unreleased form, her hair is raven-black and her left eye is green, with a hint of grey. The right eye is covered behind her bangs and it is oddly mismatched. The eye itself is completely red, except for the pupil which is blue.

~Self~

Personality:
Mysterious.
Incognita is very mysterious, dark and distant. She is usually alone in her room, playing enchanting melodies on her piano. As she is rarely seen other places in Las Noches and even rarer seen smiling. Some Arrancars think she is a zombie, controlled by their leader. She hardly talks to fellow Espada and appears only when she is needed. During the meetings, Incognita is often very quiet, only questioning fellow-Espada's suggestions and criticizes them (the criticism is hidden in metaphores).
She is known to leave Las Noches every fourth day, every month and returns several days later. Why she leaves, and what she is doing when she is gone, is a mystery.

Nature Lover.
Incognita love nature over most things and usually brings a flower from the living world with her to Hueco Mundo, planting it in her private flowerbed in her room. Though the flowers only survive a day or two, it brigthens up her room considerably.
She has a few plastic bonsais light up the otherwise gloomy room.

Fatalism.
As implied by her aspect of death; fate, Incognita is a fatalist. She believes in fate, leading her to abandoning the idea of free will. She doesn't worship fate, however, she claims to be the messenger of it. She often states that no one can escape fate. She isn't very radical, as she claims that fate never intended to kill someone of pure sadism (at least not when using her as a messenger). Incognita is known to have claimed to know fate, in person.

Otherwise, Incogita doesn't have much personality to speak of.
Quirks: Refers herself as 'Prophet', and often ends her sentences with 'Dixi'.
Sexuality: None.
History:
Incognita doesn't remember the most of her human life, except her last days.
She was the last victim of a sadistic mass-murder and died protecting another person. She doesn't remember the identity of the person, though, something that have tainted her the most of her life. Another thing she remembered, was that she was connected to fate even as a human.

She was a Plus for a fairly long time, wandering the streets, with no memory. As she wandered in the wandered, she came across a weird creature. Big, with fur and a mask...? She ran away from it, but it was faster than her. It quickly grabbed her and attempted to eat her. It would have killed her, if it wasn't for another creature that looked similar to the first one. Both of them fought, and soon many of had gathered and oddly fought for a lone soul.

Incognita escaped the scene, unharmed, but mentally; she was seriously damaged. She wandered around for some time, but soon started to feel an unexplainable hunger. The hunger started to take over her and she didn't know what to do. Pain followed. As time passed, she turned into a Hollow.

She usually hid herself in Hueco Mundo and rarely left for the World of the Living. She devoured other Hollows and become stronger. Incognita didn't have a name at that time, but decided to take the name 'Periculum', which means 'Danger' on Latin. She quickly become a Menos Grande, the dominant head of one at least. As a fearless killing machine, she headed to 'The Forest of Menos' and was one of the few that usually left it.

As she turned into an Adjuchas, the real hunt started and she left the forest of Menos. This wasn't just a hunt for food, it was a hunt for identity as no one wanted to revert back into a Gillian. Incognita was one of the most noticeable, as she felt regret for killing someone.

Then, she headed back into the Forest of Menos. There, she turned into a Vasto Lorde, one of the elite. At this point, Incognita had already developed her own personality, not just like a wild animal. This disturbed the other hollows, and she was exiled from the forest. She was found by a man; Sousuke Aizen. He turned her into an Arrancar and she was asked about her name. Incognita choosed the only name that sounded okay to her; Incognita Periculum (Unknown Danger). After this, she never saw Aizen again.

Incognita hardly participed in the riot after Aizen was defeated, ensuring her survival. Along with the fact that she possesses a vast power-level, she was awarded the spot as 'Segunda Espada'.

~Resurreccion~

Name: Fortuna (Spanish for "Fortune", Japanese for "Angel of the Godless World")
Seal Description:
Spoiler:

Fortuna takes the appearance of a purple war-fan with spikes on it's edges. It can be folded together and while in this form, it is as sharp as any katana. In it's unfolded form, Fortuna can actually shoot the spikes on the edges. These spikes will regenerate after 1 post.
Aspect of Death: Fate.
Release Phrase: "Judge the mortal ones".
Element/Class type: Divine.
Resurreccion Appearance:
Spoiler:
In order to use her ressurecion, she must absorb Sin Dios (in other words, it must be active) and her zanpakuto Fortuna. The process releases spiritual pressure enough to demolish Las Noches and a good portion around it.

~Standard Techniques~

Name: Cero.
Description: Cero is a form of attack used by Menos, Arrancar and Visored. As a standard energy blast, it consists of firing a powerful blast of concentrated spiritual energy at the target. While in most cases it is fired from the mouth, some Arrancar and Visored are capable of firing Cero from their hands, fingers and other parts of their bodies. Incognita can fire her Cero from various body-parts; including her right toe, both index fingers and from her Hollow-hole. Her Cero is colored dark teal.
Duration: Instant.
Cool Down: 3 posts.

Name: Gran Rey Cero (Spanish for "Grand King Zero", Japanese for "Royal Hollow Flash")
Description: This is a Cero that only Espada are allowed to use. It is performed by mixing an Arrancar's own blood with the Cero. The result is a Cero with a much greater attack power and speed as well as a change of color unique to the Espada. It is also many times more powerful than a normal Cero, capable of disturbing the fabric of space, it also seems to spin like a razor upon release as it compresses and decompresses due to the sheer speed and raw power. It is a drastically potent Cero, used only by the Espada themselves. Incognita charges her Gran Rey Cero from her right foot, creating a rather wide and destructive Cero. It is colored neon teal. It's destructive potential is great enough to crush Karakura Town into mere dust.
Duration: Instant.
Cool Down: 6 posts.

Name: Sonido Master.
Description: Incognita is perhaps the most proficient Sonido-user in Hueco Mundo. As she also is a long-distance fighter, she is often considered as a very tricky opponent.
Duration: Passive.
Cool Down:

Name: Master Hand-to-Hand Combatant.
Description: Incognita mainly relies on her zanpakuto, cero and prediction, but she is also a highly proficient hand-to-hand combatant. She mainly kicks her opponents.
Duration: Passive.
Cool Down:

Name: Immense Durability.
Description: One of the more remarkable traits of Incognita, is her vast durability. She can easily take damage most other arrancars can't, and still contiue fighting.
Duration: Passive.
Cool Down:

Name: Enhanced Hierro.
Description: Alas her fragile appearance, Incognita's Hierro is one of the toughest in the Espada.
Duration: Passive, as long as she is having enough reiryoku.
Cool Down:

Name: Overwhelming Spiritual Pressure.
Description: Even by Espada standards, Incognita's spiritual pressure is monsterous. She can easily suffocate an Espada with just letting out a small amount of spiritual pressure. If she looks at something with her right eye, the sheer spiritual pressure can seemingly distort the area and cause breathing problems for beings with lower reiatsu than an average captain.
Duration: Passive.
Cool Down:

Name: Master Swordsmanship Specialist.
Description: Despite the fact that Incognita rarely engages in it, she is extremely proficient in swordsplay, as shown when she summons a sword in her resurrecion.
Duration: Passive.
Cool Down:

~Other Techniques~

Name: Centella (Spanish for "Flash", Japanese for "Foreward Flash")
Usage: Both; enhanced in resurrecion.
Description: The unique ability Incognita possesses, connected to her aspect of death; 'Fate'.
It enabled her to look into the future, to an extent. During the time she uses this technique, her eyes will glow purple. Also, she is completely immobile while doing so, making her vulnerable for attacks. However, she only stays in this state for one third of a second (In her resurrecion, only one tenth). She can only predict the next 5 seconds of the future (10 in resurrecion). If someone were to touch her during this time, her spiritual pressure would paralyze them for about 1 second.
Duration: Instant.
Cool Down: 1 post.

Name: Cero Tijera (Spanish for "Zero Scissor", Japanese for "Slashing Cero")
Usage: Both.
Description: Incognita's signature Cero. She charges a Cero between her fingers, and squeezes them together when she is about to fire it. This process creates a flat, thin Cero with cutting capabilities. Incognita specifially developed it to cut through other Ceros, enabling her to create a safe room for herself in the middle of the obligerating attack. The Cero is sharp enough to to cut through limbs. But, this Cero can also easily be dispelled if an arrancar with strong Hierro punches it.
Incognita can charge in total 8 Cero Tijera simultaneously; one between each finger. Cero Tijeria is colored purple.
Duration: Instant.
Cool Down: 2 posts.

Name: Depravado (Spanish for "Depraved", Japanese for "Depraved Destiny")
Usage: Unreleased.
Description: Incognita forms a golden leash made of her reiatsu between her hands. If this leash attaches itself to another being, the leash will become invisible. This leash is having the unique ability to bind two fates together. E.g. If the Incognita is damaged, the other person will also attain the same damage. Also, if the other being is damaged, so is Incognita. Incognita must sustain damages while the leash is active in order to let the victim get the same damages. If any of the parts state the incantation; 'Fate bound together, bound together by pain, sweat and tears. Fate, break your seal', the technique will be cancelled.
Duration: 4 posts.
Cool Down: 10.

Name: Sin Dios (Spanish for "Godless, Japanese for "Godless Ressurection")
Usage: Sealed.
Description: To activate this technique, Incognita must say the incantation; 'Soul of the mind, key to lifes aether. Soul of the lost, withdrawn from it's vessel. Let strenght be granted, so the world might be mended. So the world might be mended.' When the incantation is finished, a vast armor carrying a colossal club will appear. The armor is sentinent, but can not speak. While it is summoned, Incognita is relatively helpless as she channels all the spiritual energy she possess from her right eye (the eye holds the key to using many of her techniques). Only capable of using her zanpakuto as a weapon, along with sonido'ing and using Centella. This armor will move on it's own, capable of communicating with Incognita via telepathy. It is very slow, but it's hit can deal fatal wounds easily. It's durability is also unrivalled, but it is not very resistent to heat. The sheer spiritual pressure exerted when this technique is used is enormous and it will easily distort the area around it. It has an almost unnoticeable entrance on it's back. As the armor is almost twice the size on Incognita, she can easily hide inside it. If she speaks while she is inside, her voice will be distorted and is often mistaken for the voice of a male.
It is rumoured that this armor somehow is connected to the only person Incognita cared for.

The Armor:

Duration: As long as Incognita wants or how long her spiritual pressure lasts.
Cool Down: Can only be used once in a fight.

Name: Comprension (Spanish for "Comprehension", Japanese for "Comprehension of the Mind")
Usage: Both.
Description: By touching someone, Incognita can reveal their true emotions. It is no offensive ability, and as Incognita can't understand human emotions, this is more an experience than something else.
Duration: Instant.
Cool Down: 4 posts.

Name: Fatiga (Spanish for "Fatigue", Japanese for "Breath of Exhaustion")
Usage: Resurrecion.
Description: Everytime this Incognita exhales, she releases an invisible gas. This gas isn't dangerous in any way, but if it is inhaled, the victim will feel either feel tired, cold, dizzy or even happy. It only effects someone if they are inside a room, without any escape routes.
Duration: Passive.
Cool Down:

Name: Veras (Spanish for "Truth", Japanese for "True Destiny")
Usage: Both.
Description: A stronger version of Centella. Incognita will predict the future. She can predict as far as she wants, but must wait half that time before she can use Veras again. Similar to Centella, Incognita is immobile and must be protected by her allies.
Duration: As long as she wants.
Cool Down: Half the time she used.

Name: Flight.
Usage: Resurrecion.
Description: Incognita possesses wings in her resurrecion, capable of flight.
Duration: Passive.
Cool Down:

Name: Oscuro Bala (Spanish for "Black Bullet", Japanese for "Black Hollow Bullet")
Usage: Resurrecion.
Description: In her resurrecion, Incognita can fire a pitch black bala, known as Bala Oscuro. This bala is two times stronger than a normal Bala fired by someone of her level. At point blank, it can blast a hole in someone with a middle-level Hierro.
Duration: Instant.
Cool Down: 3 posts, after rapid succession.

Name: Alma (Spanish for "Soul", Japanese for "Soulless Realm")
Usage: Resurrecion.
Description: Incognita summons a vast arena, almost as big as Las Noches in size. The arena seems to be empty, but voices and shouts can be heard. The arena is having a single special effect; the ability to remove Reishi. This unables anyone to use reishi-based techniques, including Incognita. Incognita needs to be in perfect health in order to maintain and use this technique, as it tires her greatly after using it.
Duration:
Cool Down:

Name: Dardo del Fatalidad (Spanish for "Spear of Fatality", Japanese for "Lance of Justice")
Usage: Resurrecion.
Description: With the reishi surrounding her, Incognita creates a pink spear in her left hand. It is far from as sharp as a sword and completely useless when it comes to impaling. It is mostly used to force opponents back. But when throw the spear can quite handy. As it is extremely dull, it can't effect a victim if it hits them directly. However, Incognita can state the command "Katsu" when it impacts the victim. This causes the spear to rupture and form smaller spears levitating above the enemy. They will smash down towards the victim, giving only small amount of reaction time. The victims can, however, easily evade the technique by backsteping or using a speed technique to escape.
Duration: Instant.
Cool Down: Can only have one spear at the time, and must wait at least 2 posts to create a new one.

Name: Agarrarse (Spanish for "Cling", Japanese for "Fate's Attachment")
Usage: Resurrecion.
Description: When Incognita states the name of this technique, she will vaporize a second later. She will disappear in one post, and returns seemingly unchanged. However, Incognita is actually intangible. She can stay in this form as long as she wants, but she can not harm her opponents. In order to return to her original form, she must vaporize again, before returning two posts later. When she reforms, she is vulnerable for attacks. She usually sonido's away from her opponent, as when she is intangible her reiatsu is also masked. Her reiatsu can only be felt when she returns fully to her normal form.
Duration: As long as she wants.
Cool Down: 5 post.

Name: Enhanced speed, Hierro and Strenght.
Usage: Resurrecion.
Description: When Incognita enters Resurrecion, her speed, strenght and hierro will improve drastically.
Duration: Passive.
Cool Down:

Name: Cortadora (Spanish for "Guillotine", Japanese for "Fate's Sword")
Usage: Resurrecion.
Description: If Incognita manages to draw enough blood from her enemy, she can draw a pentagram at her right palm. When it is finished, Incognita must say the incantation: 'The mortal one, drawing blood from the hind. The God, drawing blood from the mortal one. Moth of death, butterfly of hell! Bring your lips together, lock in an eternal kiss of death.' The pentagram will start to glow when the incantation is finished, then a double-edged jian will be summoned from the center of the pentagram. This will cause Incognita some pain, but not something noticeable. This sword is not unique at all, and is very similar to a Zanpakuto. However, it is broken much easier than a normal Zanpakuto. However, this blade is having regenerative properties. Once every 5th post, the jian can regenerate it's blade. However, if the hilt is damaged, the sword is destroyed.
Duration: When summoned, it lasts until it is destroyed.
Cool Down: 4 posts.

Name: Status Malus: Dissolubilis (Latin for "Stand Malevolent: Fade to Nothing")
Appearance: When this technique is released, Incognita's black wings will fade out and be replaced by white wings of pure Reiryoku. Also, white energy will flow from the sword of Cortadora.
Duration: Lasts for 3 posts.
Using Rights: Resurrecion only.
Requirements/Preparations: Cortadora must be active.
Description: In order to use this technique, Incognita must already have the sword of Cortadora. She holds the blade close to her nose. She must then state the name of this technique. Tremors caused by her spiritual pressure will follow, before a white aura will envelop the blade and her shoulders. The black wings on her back will be completely enveloped by the white aura and will grow three times in size. The jian of Cortadora will extend in size and form a rapier of pure reiryoku. While this technique is in effect, Incognita's strenght raise to a level where a weak pull will rip of limbs, her speed to a level where detecting her with the very eye is hard and her spiritual pressure where it crushes objects with weak spiritual pressure that comes close to her.
Incognita can only attack once with the sword of Cortadora, but this attack is extremely lethal, capable of cutting through even the strongest Hierro. When she has successfully struck the enemy, Incognita will reseal herself and collapse, due to the stain the attacks causes her.
Preparation time: 2 posts.
Duration: 3 posts.
Cooldown: Once per release form.

~Rp Sample~

The room was unusually quiet, even for the Espada meeting-room. The dim light from a lamp was the only thing in the room that kept it from falling into darkness. Only two chairs was occupied; the seats with the numbers 1 and 2; two of the three most powerful Espada. Zilo, the Primera, was reading a book, while the Segunda, Incognita was just waiting for the others to arrive.

She closed her eyes and wondered why all the lower ranked Espada's and the Cero Espada was so late. The two of them had been waiting for at least a hour. She crossed her legs and looked towards at the door. Odd... I haven't heard anyone walk past the room either she thought and shook her head slightly and noticed that the Primera was looking at her. "Something wrong, Incognita?" he asked, with a small hint of concern in his voice. Ingonita stared out in the air. "Nothing special... Just odd that the others haven't showed up yet. And my Fraccion haven't made a single noise outside, which is quite mysterious. They use to be very noisy and usually fights each other constantly..." she replied as she closed her eyes. Yes, her Fraccion was indeed noisy, they only stopped fighting when she requested them to.

Incognita pushed her chair back and walked towards the door. "I suppose it would be best to check if they were waiting for me outside" She grabbed the handle and pulled it down. The door creaked, before it went fully open. Her usually half-lidded and lifeless eyes stared at the floor. Her mouth was open. The floor was stained with blood. Two, no three mangled bodies was lying on the floor. One of them even had it's intestines coming out. Incognita slowly walked to them. She remembered their faces, at least the ones that had something left of a face. They were her Fraccion. All of them. One of them was decapitated, one had his intestines ripped out. The last was just heavily damaged. "In-Incognita-sama..." the voice whispered. She turned to look at one of them. The voice was very weak, barely hearable. It was the last of her Fraccion; Murra. She rushed to the Fraccion. "W-we... We failed you." she whispered to Incognita, before she went silent.

The hand of Incognita trailed over the eyes of her deceased Fraccion, closing them. She noticed that Zilo was coming behind her, patting her shoulder. "I am sorry for your loss..." he whispered. Incognita sighed and rose. "Fate took them away from me, it was her decision" she whispered with a barely hearable voice. Zilo let go of her shoulder, and she noticed that he let out a gasp. She looked at his face. He was looking another direction, with his teeth bared and eyes filled with anger. She turned her head the same direction. There, the Fraccion of the Primera was lying, with a peaceful look on her face with a blade stabbed through her back. "Alejandro..." Zilo snarled. So the Quinto is their killer? That man... Going so far just because of a position Incognita thought. Alejandro smiled and drew the blade out of the Fraccion. "So you two finally decided to come out? Nice. Now I can kill you as well!" he shouted and started to run towards them.

Incognita lifted up her right foot up. Yet, another unnecessary battle against a weak Espada. "Killing the Fraccion, provoking him... You are certainly not the smartest of the Espada. However, I am fated to forgive you. Please leave, before you die an unnecessary death" she said with her monotone voice. Alejandro started to laugh and rised his sword. "How pathetic. Weak? Me? And leaving a fight, is like forgetting to take your medicine on purpose!" he shouted as he lunged towards them. Incognita sighed and noticed that Zilo raised his hand. Alejandro was close to them now, Incognita knew. And she had predicted that he would underestimate them. "Cero." both of them said in unison. White light mixed with teal, creating a light teal-like colored beam that crushed everything in it's way.

The grilled corpse of the Quinto Espada fell down. Incognita closed her eyes. She would leave the scene now, giving her Fraccion a proper burial. She was sure that Zilo would do the same to his.
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PostSubject: Re: The Fearful Prophet Espada, Incognita   The Fearful Prophet Espada, Incognita Icon_minitimeFri Oct 15, 2010 11:42 am

Finished. ^^
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PostSubject: Re: The Fearful Prophet Espada, Incognita   The Fearful Prophet Espada, Incognita Icon_minitimeFri Oct 15, 2010 1:25 pm

Please explain the technique: Depravado, i don't understand exactly what you mean when you say they seemingly disappear....then you say that if incognita is hurt then so are they etc >.<

for the ability: Comprehension could anyone be immune? someone of a high level? or cans he use it against anyone?

for the ability: Fatiga, could anyone be immune? i cant see how it would effect anyone if they were outside xD or unless they were really close to inhale it even inside...but none the less if you want the ability then you can have it ^^

for the ability: Alma (Spanish for "Soul", Japanese for "Soulless Realm") i don't really like that she gets to summon spirit lions etc from it ...summoning something that large would be extremely tiring also. If it were just a change in arena then i would allow it even though it would be kind of useless xD

For the ability: Dardo del Fatalidad (Spanish for "Spear of Fatality", Japanese for "Lance of Justice") Please explain it somemore, would it be possible to dodge or block etc. Also a cooldown of actual posts would be needed.

for this ability: Agarrarse (Spanish for "Cling", Japanese for "Fate's Attachment") please lengthen the cooldown period

for this ability: Cortadora (Spanish for "Guillotine", Japanese for "Fate's Sword") please add more to the description and rethink the cooldown, how would it be destroyed how strong is it.

For this ability: Sentencia (Spanish for "Judgement", Japanese for "Final Fortuna") o.O ummm what to say xD i dislike alot about it lol i will ask for another opinion from cypher as well

Once the changes are made i will check the app again, i may have missed stuff xD i read over it quickly. ^^
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PostSubject: Re: The Fearful Prophet Espada, Incognita   The Fearful Prophet Espada, Incognita Icon_minitimeSat Oct 16, 2010 4:23 am

o.k so for sentencia,

are you saying that it can kill someone with one hit? if their heart is the one that is heavier than the feather?
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PostSubject: Re: The Fearful Prophet Espada, Incognita   The Fearful Prophet Espada, Incognita Icon_minitimeSat Oct 16, 2010 2:15 pm

Yes, as long as the person have done crimes and evil things in theri human lives. ^^
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PostSubject: Re: The Fearful Prophet Espada, Incognita   The Fearful Prophet Espada, Incognita Icon_minitimeSat Oct 16, 2010 5:21 pm

so basically she could kill anyone with one move......yeah i don't like that xD that is op'd. Who decides if they are good or bad? you understand what i am saying right...it removes all of the chance from things. It would be like me saying that "lightning stabbed orihime, thus killing her" I couldn't do that so yeah
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PostSubject: Re: The Fearful Prophet Espada, Incognita   The Fearful Prophet Espada, Incognita Icon_minitimeSat Oct 16, 2010 6:18 pm

I would say it isn't completely the same, but whatevs.... I removed the techniques.
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PostSubject: Re: The Fearful Prophet Espada, Incognita   The Fearful Prophet Espada, Incognita Icon_minitimeSun Oct 17, 2010 6:38 am

i didn't mean to make you upset Sad really if it is going to bother you please ask Cypher/kenji for another opinion on it. I don't mind and what ever he decides is cool ^^

i never wanted to upset you Tia -_-
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No, I am not upset. You just made me look on the technique in another way. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: The Fearful Prophet Espada, Incognita   The Fearful Prophet Espada, Incognita Icon_minitimeSun Oct 17, 2010 3:51 pm

O.k so the only other thing i worry about is the depravado one,

i am worried that you could be near death then cause that much damage to your opponent by using that technique. In some cases it would cause incredible damage if you waited long enough and incognita was damaged too badly. So people would whine it was op'd if that ever occured. I am not saying to get rid of it, i am simply saying that there needs to be some kind of thing like maybe when the duration wears off so to does the damage on the opponent etc

wow i hope that made sense.
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Well, Incognita must sustain damages while the leash is active in order to let the victim get the same damages. ^^
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oh i see xD

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