Zane's bankai

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~Bankai Abilities~ Zane's bankai is, as before, the ability to use a moltitude of weapons at one singuler time. the base, or constant effect of the bankai, is that by entering the bankai stage, a dark-red set of light-armor will form around the user's body . This armor covers the legs, arms, chest, stomache, back, pretty much every spot except for the neck and head.. The armor has the durability to reduce the damage dealt upon the user by 25%. Though, after taking considerable damage, the armor will break apart in the damaged area, ( Say, being stuck by a cero in one direct point or getting hit in the same spot by a zanpakto three or four times.) This will remain broken and leave weak-points for three posts,or one post, depending on severity. after that it will start to reform back to full armor which takes two posts. Along with that , the armor itself is like a massiv battle-suit filled with weapons. Two blades will form at the hands of the armor as well as several small spikes along the arms and legs.Six small cannons will appear on the chest area, and two additional limbs will form at the sides of the user, each with their hands replaced by pronged knives.

Name of abilty/technique: Knive Barrages
Description: Through the use of manipulating his spiritual energy, Zane can charge up spiritual energy in them just as if he were going to with his guns in shikai. There are two versions to this technique, one is to fire them all in six beams, each as powerful as a hado 4 byakurai, or one large blast from them all equivilant to two ceros.
Duration:[/b) 1 post
[b]Cool Down:
6 beams- 6 posts
Giant blast- Once per topic.
Preparation:
One post

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PLEASE ENSURE THAT YOU EDIT THE MASK DURATION TO THE FOLLOWING

For a lieutenant:
Duration: 8 posts per battle

For a Captain:
Duration 11 posts per battle

AND PLEASE ENSURE YOU EDIT THE KIDO PART OF THE APP TO THE FOLLOWING

Kido: Cannot use Hado or Bakudo over the level of 40.

hi,

I think the armour is a sort of sub ability, so that means you have 3 abilities o.o

Please choose which two you wish to keep. Keep in mind that fact that they need to have little to no duration.

sincerely,
Lightning/Orihime

the armor isn't an ability, it is the form that the zanpakto takes upon using bankai.

Ok, revamped the bankai abit and removed one of the techniques. Made the duration of the non-passiv techniuqe low as well.

I only see a couple of things with this, not big at all,

With the full shot, i don't think it should be as powerful as two ceros, thats a little bit too much. Maybe one, or one and a half at most.

I like the idea for the armor, but it regenerates too fast, maybe up it to three posts for minor things like cracks, and four posts for a spot that got hit really bad.


once those two things are changed i'll give you my 1/3 thumbs up

Edited

looks good to me!!

you get my 1/3


only two more to go!! ^^

3/3 ^^!

The bankai has been added to the app, this will be locked and moved to the archieves.